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How thinking about PLOT can make your STORY better?

How? Really? Are you really asking that question… C’mon! plot is like the spine of your story, it’s the foundation on top of which everything else rests. A classic definition of it would be; “The main events of a story devised and presented as an interrelated sequence”. Now, there are two things on this definition…

Signs

In this age and time We were forced to leave everything behind Even ourselves So much that we can’t remember anymore Cloudy beyond the pain Us You think it’ll come back? Or miracles left us Waiting for a sign of god I feel I’ve wasted my life I’t’s because things are bad Worst than bad…

To live without saying goodbye.

We’re the shadows of the world The strange ones There are no stories about us No songs to celebrate our deeds The wind doesn’t know our names Our ashes won’t return to the earth Our pain will stay here Even if we go away And our smiles forever fade In a painters regret Yet I’m…

Awake

I just lost everything Every inch of myself, gone Every beat of my heart, wrong Every step ever taken, mistaken The will The thinker said Was the only thing in the end Without it, we cannot live With it, we cannot let others live So, what’s the point? Hurt others and come through Hurt yourself…

Snake Eyes (2021)

I’m gonna be honest here, I don’t care for GI Joe, I don’t know anyone who cares for GI Joe. To me this is a dead franchise (if it ever was alive). I’m gonna go even further, I remember watching those Gi Joe cartoons as a child, they sucked. No really, I mean these “soldiers”…

Halcyon Days (Chapter I)

EXT. ROAD IN THE MIDDLE OF THE MOUNTAINS – NIGHT Echoes of drifting wheels, to one side and to the other. A faint light is lit in the intense darkness. As we get closer, the light reveals the outline of the street, the rows of trees around it. It’s a winding road through a mountainous…

Defend yourself

Wolves are coming back They’re at the gates of my house They come again and again With their claws burying deep Pressing hard Against me, against my flesh But I keep here, inside And I keep being me, my story But the wolves are there They’ve always been there Building roads I don’t want to…

THEM (chapter IV)

EXT. OPEN FIELD NEAR THE ROAD – NIGHT Julia’s hood is removed. It’s Mason, still wearing his prison clothes, ragged, dirty. He drags her out of the car with her hands tied up. Then cuts the police tape as he drags her into the same open field where the police found the bodies. JULIA (struggling)…

A Few Good Men 1992 (review)

I swear that while I was watching A Few Good Men it occurred to me that I was watching the same plot as in Full Metal Jacket, the premises are quite similar, but with a positive twist of growth for the character and without the social criticism or experimentation in the human condition. The paths…

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